The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, criminals have become in a matter of discussion. The crime level is dropping now than in the past because of modern technology that can combat crime. In this essay, I strongly agree with this sentence.
There are several reasons why I agree that the crime rate nowadays decrease due to advance equipment which resolve criminals. Firstly, people should install upgrade technology at home which can alarm the owners when strangers break into the house. For example, we can adapt cameras or alarm clocks in entrance because it give a signal or record the process of robbers action. Thus, it are able to be vigilant over the sabotage scheme and avoid heinous crimes. Secondly, technology helps polices to find offenders easily through the internet. For instance, hackers usually use a website which assist them to exchange goods such as addicted drug or taking secret information from companies. The internet can save information people in the world about time and date of per person who logged in websites. Therefore, polices can know data of people who take part in illegal acts and prevent them.
There are a numerous of reasons why some people believe that the offenders rate increase now because of employment. First of all, more and more people are find difficult jobs due to the low of recruitment in companies. Also, they do not have money to take care of their children or their parents. For this reason, it lead to people becoming robbers or murders. As a result, the number of robbers are very common in many countries. Furthermore, they do not be well-educated from both schools and their parents. To illustrate, they can affect negative personality from their parents such as parents are very busy in works so they do not care or take care of their children and in school, bad students can induce other students to participating in bar club, play games or using smoke. Children do not know to distinguish between good and bad acts.
In conclusion, there are a significant drop in criminal rate today due to using modern technology. In my opinion, I complete agree that equipment is very necessary in our life because it can prevent strangers to break into the house or giving a signal for the owner’s house. If polices encourage people using technology, it protects us to avoid a serious threat of crime and have a high quality of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1970.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87623762376 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57293854257 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537128712871 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9482746847 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5454545455 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.95454545455 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248746159162 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642290666507 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869339123723 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153412360276 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577643141037 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.