Cultures all over the world are turning similar.
What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development?
It is universally accepted that cultures and traditions from all around the globe are becoming common in this age and era. I opine that this a positive development and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, it is evident that technology is playing a pivotal role in globalization and That is the main cause of cultures turning common in today's world. People all over the world are connected through the internet and can interact virtually with other cultures and traditions on the touch of a button whenever they want. Previously, this was not the case, to demonstrate, those people who were willing to spend holidays in other countries or some business tourists only get a chance to interact with their cultures and buy their customs as a memory for them. Moreover, the internet is also the fastest way of communication throughout the world and it is often seen that people sending a friend request to foreigners through social media applications and get to know about each other's culture and customs.
It is true that the above-mentioned reasons making the cultures common but I believe that this could be advantageous in numerous ways. Firstly, It brings people closer to each other which can lead to greater harmony across borders to send a message of peace. Secondly, a myriad of business opportunities would be open for the groups who are willing to expand their work worldwide. For instance, Pakistani national dress, shalwar kameez, has been recently bought by several Australians when they visited Pakistan for the holidays which help in generating profits for the shopkeepers. In other words, if cultures are becoming similar, they are uniting humans to work together in different aspects of life.
To recapitulate, undoubtedly, cultures and traditions are turning common and the utmost reason is the technology. it brings a plethora plus points in terms of bringing people closer to each other, from a broader perspective.
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Suggestion: others'; other's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15789473684 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83478420612 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566563467492 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7654350686 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.153846154 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8461538462 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247122355463 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877055292323 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711220913971 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150568496976 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687484016443 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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