in current society, many people are struggling with obesity. what is the main cause of this. what are the effects
It is a fact that the number of people who are facing to overweight problem in modern society. This essay will examine the causes as well as the problems which are related to this tendency.
There are two prime causes for this trend. The first and foremost is unhealthy dishes which are extremely popular in current society. It is easier to find the fast food chains such as KFCs, Macdonalds than fresh products store in urban areas. They provide large ready meals which contain high calories and trans fat. It is convenient for people who have not time to prepare dishes on their daily basis. Another main reason is that sedentary lifestyle. People tend to depend on more automatic machines and the lack of physical exercise even though robots are designed to help their live become comfortable.
Unsurprisingly, there are serious matters should be concerned. Firstly, physical health problem is certainly a consequence of over obesity. Eating to much fast food and sparkling beverages with high cholesterol and sugar could increase the risk of many dangerous diseases such as heart disease, type 2 diabetes. The next result is that mental health problem. Those who are living with obesity often tend to be social isolation and less willingness to participate in social activities. Because they are not confident about their appearance and distress excess weight, This leads to mental illness such as depression and anxiety.
In conclusion, obesity has become a public health issue. It is evident that there are two causes of overweight and two negative effects which require to be taken into great consideration from above analysis. Individuals should have knowledge about nutrition and have responsibility of their health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...y a consequence of over obesity. Eating to much fast food and sparkling beverages ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18571428571 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63248689359 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610714285714 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3460928845 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6666666667 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5555555556 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171448220651 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045083661967 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413607930473 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976978225271 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413373523483 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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