Currently, many people fail to balance the work with the other parts of lives, what are the reasons and how to solve it?
One of the most conspicuous trends in the 21st century is a great many employees find it hard to strike a proper balance between career development and private life. This essay aims to explore the reasons why it is far from easy to keep a life-work balance and then present solutions.
The potential reasons for the imbalance between career and personal life are manifold, but all of them seem to derive from the increasingly fierce competition in the business environment. Many are trying to survive and be successful and this forces them to spend more than eight hours per day at work. For many young people, to zero in on career is more and more essential in modern society. They believe that exerting themselves extremely hard can be to help them achieve a desirable life. On the other hand, a new employee is sure to be eliminated out of the race given cutthroat competition if he or she slackens efforts at self-improvement.
Considering the severity of this issue, some effective measures should be adopted. Although the main reason for life-work imbalance is the competition for a successful career, instead of trying to remove that element from the human work environment people should find ways to better adapt to a competitive life. One of the notable measures is to build effective time management skills. More precisely, people should review job activities, priorities and create a boundary between balancing work and personal time. In addition, considering to outsource and delegate both at work and at home also are not bad ideas. Successful people take full advantage of this, from sending out laundry to having an assistant sort their mail.
In closing, my stance is that it is no easy task to keep an appropriate balance between career and life at times, however, one should make efforts to achieve this balance to have a better physical and mental health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96835443038 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75139620206 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560126582278 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6226665292 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.142857143 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143964876358 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495917065575 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380893463842 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912841943519 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305042260589 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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