Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective , and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

Essay topics:

Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective , and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement

nowadays, it is believed that now there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. in this issue, i do agree about this statement for some reasons.
To begin with, there are some advantages from this problem are today many people prefer alternative medicine, compared to having to go to a doctor for treatment. Firstly, the alternative medicine assessed safer and more effective, it is because using basic herbal ingredients and not synthetic drug like drugs from pharmaceutical companies. Secondly, can refuse stress in patients due to insecurity in the illness that is often difficult to know in medical treatment. In addition, cost which needed quite low and cheap when compared with medical treatment it is because using the advanced technology that is very expensive
On the contrary, there are some disadvantages from this issue the some of alternative treatment at this time it has not been studied. Opening, most of the medicines which is using not scientifically tested in that delivered from generation to generation secondary can cause death for do not have ability in their fields. Thirdly, alternative treatment generally it cannot give instant healing so needed the longer of time for curing compared to medical treatment
To conclude, in the modern era like at this time how much better when choose that is the best for our healthy which is already tested scientifically or medical compared with the alternative treatment.

Votes

This essay topic by users

Post date	Users	Rates	Link to Content
2018-12-26	Abdul28_	11	view
2018-12-26	Abdul28_	61	view
2018-12-26	Diah kurniawati	56	view

>>> More users practiced this topic >>>

Essay Categories

IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

Essays by user Diah kurniawati :

Write an essay by this topic

Comments

Essay evaluations by e-grader

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
nowadays, it is believed that now there ...
^^
Line 1, column 3, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nowadays
nowadays, it is believed that now there is a tre...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...ve, and at worst they may be dangerous. in this issue, i do agree about this state...
^^
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t they may be dangerous. in this issue, i do agree about this statement for some ...
^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...about this statement for some reasons. To begin with, there are some advantages...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nced technology that is very expensive On the contrary, there are some disadvan...
^^
Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
... some disadvantages from this issue the some of alternative treatment at this time i...
^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r curing compared to medical treatment To conclude, in the modern era like at t...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in addition, on the contrary, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.172 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8757774601 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.0107498016 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.666666667 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7777777778 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7777777778 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301065394318 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145268932715 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143726282863 0.0667982634062 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231800426766 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.221431916558 0.056905535591 389% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Essay evaluations by e-grader

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in addition, on the contrary, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments