7. Some people think that the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them how much they produce and sell. Do you agree or disagree ? Include any relevant examples based on your knowledge and experience.

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7. Some people think that the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them how much they produce and sell. Do you agree or disagree ? Include any relevant examples based on your knowledge and experience.

Recently, some people think that the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them how they produce and sell. In this statement I disagree about the issue for several reasons.
On the one hand, the main demerit at the problem is work is not just about money, it is because not big little salary obtained or how often the monthly wage increases but there are <span style="font-size: 1.1em;"> the other aspect which really makes someone motivated to toil </span><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">first</span><span style="font-size: 1.1em;"> aim, when the human </span>have<span style="font-size: 1.1em;"> purpose that </span>must be<span style="font-size: 1.1em;"> achieved then the goal is what drives it </span><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">toward</span><span style="font-size: 1.1em;"> labor, the second important experience a lot of persons also choose go about as a media on get valuable impression during be on duty we will use the time to learn more and try to take the chance to add to the accident, thirdly be at work too is a </span><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">work ship</span><span style="font-size: 1.1em;"> seek the sustenance in a lawful way, vision and mission when we succeed explain the vision and mission we face so will there is a feel that is hard to describe </span><br><span style="font-size: 1.1em;"></span>
In the other think, the merit of this proposition is ample mortals turn a finger to collect money to continue life and not infrequently they are willing to sacrifice health it is due to work becomes the main thing that is though and always to be wish to get money and is trusted to give its own satisfaction foremost work is destiny they who are never work with the excuse have much cash, second with the funds we can fulfil all our daily needs instance the employee who they are always effort to work hard in the interest of find the high retained or position desired
In close the currency is not everything its useless we have plentiful of finances but our minds are depressed our psyche are calm and we don't life happily better to live midestly as we are.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Recently, some people think that the bes...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e about the issue for several reasons. On the one hand, the main demerit at the...
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Line 2, column 751, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to go'
Suggestion: to go
...experience a lot of persons also choose go about as a media on get valuable impres...
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Line 2, column 763, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a medium' or simply 'media'?
Suggestion: a medium; media
... lot of persons also choose go about as a media on get valuable impression during be on...
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Line 2, column 1058, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a lawful way" with adverb for "lawful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...size: 1.1em;'> seek the sustenance in a lawful way, vision and mission when we succeed exp...
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Line 3, column 570, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd the high retained or position desired In close the currency is not everything ...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 140, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...re depressed our psyche are calm and we dont life happily better to live midestly as...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, so, then, third, thirdly

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41907514451 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.54367341379 2.80592935109 162% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566473988439 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 115.0 20.2975951904 567% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 905.993500099 49.4020404114 1834% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 625.0 106.682146367 586% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 115.333333333 20.7667163134 555% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.6666666667 7.06120827912 293% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100595029081 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.228453844752 0.084324248473 271% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.269380320074 0.0667982634062 403% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153914030875 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.199628131603 0.056905535591 351% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 61.8 13.0946893788 472% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -45.25 50.2224549098 -90% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 48.1 11.3001002004 426% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.34 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.58 8.58950901804 146% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 48.0 10.1190380762 474% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 48.0 10.7795591182 445% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Recently, some people think that the bes...
^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e about the issue for several reasons. On the one hand, the main demerit at the...
^^
Line 2, column 751, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to go'
Suggestion: to go
...experience a lot of persons also choose go about as a media on get valuable impres...
^^
Line 2, column 763, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a medium' or simply 'media'?
Suggestion: a medium; media
... lot of persons also choose go about as a media on get valuable impression during be on...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1058, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a lawful way" with adverb for "lawful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...size: 1.1em;'> seek the sustenance in a lawful way, vision and mission when we succeed exp...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 570, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd the high retained or position desired In close the currency is not everything ...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 140, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...re depressed our psyche are calm and we dont life happily better to live midestly as...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, so, then, third, thirdly

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41907514451 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.54367341379 2.80592935109 162% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566473988439 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 115.0 20.2975951904 567% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 905.993500099 49.4020404114 1834% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 625.0 106.682146367 586% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 115.333333333 20.7667163134 555% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.6666666667 7.06120827912 293% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100595029081 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.228453844752 0.084324248473 271% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.269380320074 0.0667982634062 403% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153914030875 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.199628131603 0.056905535591 351% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 61.8 13.0946893788 472% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -45.25 50.2224549098 -90% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 48.1 11.3001002004 426% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.34 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.58 8.58950901804 146% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 48.0 10.1190380762 474% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 48.0 10.7795591182 445% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.