Cycling has more benefits yet in some countries there is a decrease in the number of people using bicycle as their main form of transportation Why is it happening Give suggestions on how to encourage people to use bicycle again

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Cycling has more benefits, yet in some countries there is a decrease in the number of people using bicycle as their main form of transportation. Why is it happening? Give suggestions on how to encourage people to use bicycle again ?

According to statement, do cycling leads to numerous positive aspects. However, in some of nations, utilisation of bicycle become decease day by day in accordance to major source of transport in large numbers of individuals. There are plenty of reasons due to which, this criteria is happening. Yet, there are also many aspects via which public become encourage. Couple of view are explained in forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, in modern era, advancement in technology becomes proliferate with increase of days. Due to which, transportation system becomes advance with novel innovations which includes cars, buses, motorcycle and so on. Such transports are more reliable and travel distance within short period of time. Due to which, people realise, these vehicles are more convinient to reach their destination without wastage of time. Moreover, another factor is preferabled towards comfortability. Because, in such vehicles, public reach at their destination point without any physical effort and with comfort zone. As a result, individuals preferability leads toward favourable aspects which results to avoid cycling.
On other hand, there are plenty of methods which are used to guide and encourage public regards significance of cycling. First and foremost way is organisation of awareness programmes regards demerits of other engine based transports. Legal communities should aware residents about harmful gases which are released by engines of vehicles and such gases are catastrophic to atmosphere. Due to which, environmental degradation is happened. On contrast, cycling is eco friendly which do not emit such gases. Furthermore, volunteers should encourage citizens about benefits of cycling which is another major form of exercise includes more physical work. Due to which, issues of obesity, breathing rate and so on. As a result, this shows positive impression on health of homosapiens.
To recapitulate, according to my outlook, although other mode of advanced transport represents number of advantageous aspect due to rush of contemporary era. However, cycling shows their prominent role regards health and environment.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the nations') or simply say ''some nations''.
Suggestion: some of the nations; some nations
... numerous positive aspects. However, in some of nations, utilisation of bicycle become decease ...
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Line 1, column 268, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ere are plenty of reasons due to which, this criteria is happening. Yet, there are a...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...liable and travel distance within short period of time. Due to which, people realise, these ve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, in short, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68847352025 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02069543103 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588785046729 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8933975384 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5909090909 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31818181818 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134824126603 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342313975543 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412950026925 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796549938406 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107856298014 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.13 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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