Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. Why is it not popular in many places? And how to increase its popularity?
It is true that despite the undeniable merits in terms of protecting the environment, bicycles are not a common transportation in many parts of the world. This essay will discuss the reason behind this phenomenon and suggest some feasible solutions to it.
Potential risks involved and inconvenience could be two factors responsible for the obscurity of bikes. Regarding the former, bike paths can be absent in various countries, meaning that cyclists are forced to share lanes with other mobility devices. This kind of movement makes bike riders more vulnerable to collisions with freighting trucks and private automobiles, increasing the number of road fatalities and severe injuries from crashes. Concerning the latter, cycling is often a physically demanding task and causes exhaustion and perspiration at the end of the journey, thereby reducing work efficiency. Owing To these facts, the masses tend to opt for other means of transport other than bikes.
Various measures, nevertheless, can be adopted to address the aforementioned issues. A simple solution to start with is that the government should allocate their budget for separate bike lane infrastructure. This will help minimize unpredicted accidents and guarantee the safety of both cyclists and other traffic participants, hence boosting cycling uptake . As far as companies are concerned, they should implement some bathrooms at the workplace to enable cycle - friendly employees to take a shower when arriving. Such an implementation, to a certain extent, can help avoid some uncomfortable conditions and promote staff’s readiness for a working day.
In conclusion, cycling-related injuries and inconvenience contribute to the unpopularity of bicycles. However, lane segregation and bathroom construction would bolster the fondness for cycling activities of the general public.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...bscurity of bikes. Regarding the former, bike paths can be absent in various coun...
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...er means of transport other than bikes. Various measures, nevertheless, can be a...
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... help minimize unpredicted accidents and guarantee the safety of both cyclists an...
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...ticipants, hence boosting cycling uptake . As far as companies are concerned, they...
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... avoid some uncomfortable conditions and promote staff’s readiness for a working ...
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Line 4, column 212, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... fondness for cycling activities of the general public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, nevertheless, regarding, so, in conclusion, kind of, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70652173913 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18059864699 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670289855072 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3046257259 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144055293053 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426397550093 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408096894223 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786322529243 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252814652707 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.64 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 125, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bscurity of bikes. Regarding the former, bike paths can be absent in various coun...
^^
Line 2, column 511, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing is often a physically demanding task and causes exhaustion and perspiration ...
^^
Line 2, column 523, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a physically demanding task and causes exhaustion and perspiration at the end o...
^^
Line 2, column 707, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er means of transport other than bikes. Various measures, nevertheless, can be a...
^^^^
Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... help minimize unpredicted accidents and guarantee the safety of both cyclists an...
^^
Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ticipants, hence boosting cycling uptake . As far as companies are concerned, they...
^^
Line 3, column 614, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... avoid some uncomfortable conditions and promote staff’s readiness for a working ...
^^
Line 4, column 212, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... fondness for cycling activities of the general public.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, nevertheless, regarding, so, in conclusion, kind of, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70652173913 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18059864699 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670289855072 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3046257259 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144055293053 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426397550093 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408096894223 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786322529243 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252814652707 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.64 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.