Newly developed technical devices have always been very influential for kids, but , this is not completely related to the modern world. Some pediatricians suggest that this development may create bad impacts on children. I believe that, this habits of kids may not create any problems for them. So, I strongly disagree to the statement.
Modern world has been releasing so many inventions everyday, meanwhile , children has close attachments to electronic devices. For instance, during 2000 kids have influenced by TV. So, modern world has no role in it. Moreover, while, playing with mobiles children develop some minute skills to operate those devices, which, may help them to have knowledge regarding the technical aspects.
Along with that, children only use mobile phone for gaming only and that habit help them to connect events and improve their memory and intelligence. Moreover, most parents create restrictions and passwords before giving mobile to their child. As result, parents can assure that children might not misuse the device. Furthermore, nowadays, so many newly invented applications also available in the market which can improve the educational skill of the child
To summarize, current world does not created any harm to children with mobile phones, On the other hand , which helped them to develop new skills and educational support.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'create'
Suggestion: create
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Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, may, moreover, regarding, so, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43396226415 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65833383489 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641509433962 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 73.6521478905 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165071530935 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651579042351 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283326488479 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102866592719 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197874451112 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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