Nowadays, structures within the urban areas creating huge difficulties for the people and the government. Some authorities suggest that, the government should control the new construction plans in the cities. While, others say that it is unwanted restrictions on the builders. This essay discusses both views and suggests an opinion
People create their own design and they implement it in their own property, nonetheless, this activity may become huge trouble for the government. Sometimes, government start new plans, such as, extension of road, elevation of metros, and construction of new hospitals. Meanwhile, these newly constructed private property may cause some obstruction to them. So, the government has all the rights to approve the buildings
Some entrepreneurs believe that , these processes of censoring are causing threats their freedom of using their space. However, government have all the rights to control these activities. On the other hand, this action may create some benefits for the builders also, because, before the construction itself they will get clear idea about the government's new plans. Therefore, they can plan as per the requirement of more popularity of their structure
In conclusion, authorities have every rights to control the trends within their area, especially, within the metropolitan cities. Moreover, better outlook of cities is their responsibility. In my opinion, designers and builders ought to follow the authorities for a better tomorrow and for their ultimate success
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64782608696 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95754331521 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613043478261 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5974579621 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.25 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196587715504 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708563594728 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445296251078 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119731069442 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450188144951 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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