Nowadays, environmental pollution has been widely focused threat in the world. Some people suggests that only government and other industries can reduce it, and individuals have no role in it. This essay, however, strongly disagree to the given statement.
The government can only produce strategies and fund to reduce environmental issues, only people can create difference by following the rules and implementing the plans. For instance, vehicle should have smoke test every year, inorder to control pollution, if people would not maintain it then the plan of the government may not workout. So, both government and individuals have equal role to control pollution.
Large companies also interconnected with the government while fighting against the environmental problems. Proper rules and regulations should be given to the companies by the government mainly to do safe disposal of waste products. Employees of the company also have equal role in it. Therefore, to reduce all kind of pollutions the government, individuals, and industries have necessary role
To conclude, fight to reduce environmental problems are very necessary for a better tomorrow. Equal role by all the sectors within the society is manday to achieve the goal. So, I disagree to the statement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 394, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uals, and industries have necessary role To conclude, fight to reduce environment...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 197.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49746192893 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00123227889 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583756345178 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.5750267754 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.25 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230542308369 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796945889147 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06401195046 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129948760263 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485726426096 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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