This days many people prefer ready to eat food outside to their home rather then home made food do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages.
Food is the basic need of human beings. It makes the development or growth of the body to keep our body healthy and fit. One should take food with good quality as well as nutritive food. One should avoid highly spicy and oily food as it may taste the major illness which is sometime leads to the serious condition.
To maintain our body or health in a normal condition or illness free we should use to eat food which contains nutritive substance. For that reason we should give a priority to home made food rather than out side food. One of the advantage of home made food is that we can use good quality of ingridients and also maintain hygienic condition.
Now days people having a busy schedule they having a lot of work, so the people prefer to eat outside food. There are many restaurants are available which provide tasty food with the cheaper cost. Not only that but there are many online facilities also available in which they provide a home delivery of food with reasonable price. Some time on festival season they give good discount too.
Due to this facility people become hectic with the outside food. They even don’t see the bad side how much it affects the health of people. The major disadvantage of the outside food is that, they use highly oily and low quality of ingridients which is directly affects the health of people. Some food item like pizza, burger, hot dog or many more bread items leads to the obesity which is one of the current health issue.
Due to obesity there are chances that people suffer from major diseas conditions such as hypertension, diabetes, autherosclerusis or many more. Rather than advantages there are many more disadvantages of eating outside food.
To conclude that people should avoid outside food on regular basis. We can take it in some occasions rather than it may lead to in danger of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
... priority to home made food rather than out side food. One of the advantage of home made...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73088685015 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38788774325 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477064220183 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1879005502 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4210526316 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2105263158 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57894736842 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340449444163 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115693321465 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903298559023 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180930018903 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535236837118 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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