Decreasing birth rates and superior health care has resulted in the increase in the older population in many parts of the world. This trend, according to the many experts, can cause serious problem in the society. to what extent do you agree or disagree
In several countries in the world, the percentage of elderly people increasing significantly due to the better health care facilities and falling birth rates. However, this trend, considered by many experts that, paves the way to serious social issues. In my opinion, although increasing life expectancy is a positive sign, it should not coupled with decreased birth rate.
With the advancement of science and technology, people lead a healthy life style which indicates the high life expectancy in many countries. Since after retirement, many elderly people are not able to do jobs which demands more physical efforts. Even if they capable of doing, the number is very few. In addition, government has to spent a huge sum of money for their food, shelter and health. Despite these spending, government are forced to devote money as pension. If the number of older people exceed, then the government will struggle to divert money for other developmental programs.
Furthermore, the number of birth rates decreasing along with increased life span of elderly people. This trend certainly will bring down the young charming employees from the countries work force in many sectors since they have to take many migrants to work. For instance, developed country like UK hire many young talented nurses from all across the world in order to give efficient care to the elderly people who contribute most of the UK population.This will obviously affect the economy of the country. Moreover, taking over by another powerful country can also expect while the country lack more youth.
However, experience is considered as a key feature in politics, social issues, working as doctor and so on. Even elderly people can show the correct path to the today's generation. But, if country lack youngsters, technology can not be handled effectively by the elderly people alone.
In conclusion, even though increased life expectancy shows the improvement in health care, falling the number of birth illustrates the decreasing sign of economy. Hence, I think that, government should encourage birth rate in limited number in order to have healthy young generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: todays'; today's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, as to, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2944606414 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70399322465 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574344023324 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0708574959 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.888888889 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0555555556 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206310614906 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626220752591 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492370994787 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121004805957 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705922971492 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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