In last decades, deforestation is one of the causes of myriad environment problems in our world. Many defenders try to protect remained forests in many possible ways. However, still, most people are not aware of incoming outcome. In my opinion, we have to done something to solve this problem.
First of all, in several countries such as Thailand do not have the effective law to punish people who destroy or vanish the forest. Consequently, many people are both legal and illegal cut the trees down. The most obvious solution is that for the government should emit the policy or law against the logging. For example, the police officers must fine the illegal one or put them into the jail. Secondly, individuals should be concern the value of our remained forest and join hand to do something about it. For example, creating some projects involving plant the trees in the jungle in order to restore our fruitful environment. Moreover, people should stop supporting the logging industry. The logging not only produce pollution, but also damage terrestrial and aquatic habitats. As a consequence, we must decrease the usage of products that made from woods. Finally, we have to teach our young and next generation to take care of our environment. We must to show them the following impacts of deforestation which are soil erosion, acid rain, various disasters and pollution.
To solve this problem, not only individuals, but also government and organization have to join hands to protect our environment and animal habitats.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'concerned'?
Suggestion: concerned
...e jail. Secondly, individuals should be concern the value of our remained forest and jo...
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Line 3, column 956, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...ion to take care of our environment. We must to show them the following impacts of defo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, for example, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11553784861 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74477415793 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593625498008 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4193939181 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.25 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161394095969 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501198085289 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597169926301 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137869768484 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685393901352 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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