Demand for food is increasing worldwide.
What is the cause of this?
What measures can the international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough?
Food is the basic need for human and life cannot be imagined without it, because food provides an energy to the people to do daily work. However, scenario has come where global demand for food is increasing exponentially, thereby it results myriad plights and predicaments for the whole world. Thus, I am going to deliberate the possible causes and solutions of this grim problem.
To begin with, lifestyle of people has been changed dramatically, which in turn has augmented desires and needs of people as a result imbalance in resources transpire such as lack of food, scarcity of water and so on, owing to manifold reasons. Firstly, ceaseless growth in population has raised the demand for food, which has brought a situation where crop production is not equivalent as per the demand of food. On the top of that, carelessness about saving food constitutes an another reason for the rising demand in food, as people waste more food than consuming it. For instance, it is a common sight that in big restaurants and hotels, large amount of food is wasted on a daily basis, rather than proper utilization.
In a similar vein, this grave problem can be resolved with proper initiatives from the side of international community in a plethora ways. Firstly, global community should make a pact and take a mandatory decision that government of every country should take the responsibility of making people aware about the modern techniques of doing farming wherein a peasant can have more crop production in a small area of land. Furthermore, people should change their mindset for farming occupation because they consider farming not as a profitable and viable option, thereby they prefer to opt another occupation, therefore positive change in mindset can bring better outcomes in overcoming this problem. In addition, worldwide community should share all information related to agriculture so that one country could come forward to fulfill another country's requirement in terms of food.
In conclusion, I reckon that international community should come together and make all possible efforts in saving this planet from hunger.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 455, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a reason' or 'another reason'.
Suggestion: a reason; another reason
...t, carelessness about saving food forms an another reason for the rising demand in food, as peopl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, i reckon, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15044247788 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73259854111 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569321533923 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1693391018 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.5 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308387067094 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113401944521 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492837852764 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178950682672 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417307540935 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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