Many people find it hard to balance their work with other parts of their lives. What are the reasons for this? How can this problem be overcome?
This competitive world has made people work hard extremely because it has become a pipe dream for the people to get success conveniently as a result unknowingly people have forgotten to give time to their family members which are utterly erroneous. Thus, I will present both the causes and solutions for overcoming this problem.
To begin with, people’s mentality has been changed dramatically wherein they are just yearning for money for fulfilling their various needs which made people’s life very congested and thereby an imbalance in their personal and professional life occurs due to plethora possible reasons. Firstly, people have become now very ambitious and have developed many desires in the form of materialistic things which in turn has made them to toil round the clock, irrespective of thinking about family. Secondly, competition has made people to be more meticulous about their jobs, thereby they do not compromise on their work with an aim of promotion, financial gain and so on, consequently, and they do more work than their working hours. For instance, it can be seen that people now give more priority to their work than their family for fulfilling all their ambitions.
On the contrary, every problem comes with a solution, which is similar in this case. This problem can easily be resolved with certain effective methods. First, people should make proper time management and have a disciplined life by which they can allocate their time for everything in an optimum way whether it is a job or for any family work. Furthermore, the government should organize various programs and campaigns where people could understand the clear distinction between personal and professional life, and the government should also make stringent laws against those companies which are forcing employees to work more than working hours. In addition, companies should provide extra facilities to those employees who are working overnight such as there should a facility for catering to all the needs of family members of employees from the side of companies.
In conclusion, I opine that one should work for accomplishing his or her goal, but without neglecting family, as a family is the one which supports someone during all phases of life.
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| 2019-10-23 | kuldeep sharma | 100 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 284, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an optimum way" with adverb for "optimum"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... can allocate their time for everything in an optimum way whether it is a job or for any family w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 1207.87684729 158% => OK
No of words: 364.0 242.827586207 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25549450549 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 3.92707691288 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76751184005 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 139.433497537 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546703296703 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 379.143842365 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.5024630542 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.6263754575 50.4703680194 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.416666667 104.977214359 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3333333333 20.9669160288 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.25397266985 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344037465487 0.242375264174 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144947342204 0.0925447433944 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829557115809 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200943642077 0.151781067708 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0962934331243 0.0609392437508 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 12.6369458128 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.3980295567 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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