the demand for freshwater is increasing day by day . What are the causes and solutions?
this is a fact scarcity of natural resources is being increasing at world level. population population " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">has been increasing day by day which leads the demand for fresh water. there are a number of reasons that why demand for ground water is escalating at higher rate and number of measures could be taken to curb this issue.
On the one hand, rising demand for water has a number of causes which which " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">i am going to disscuss. Firstly, the growing population is primary reason to pump up fresh water as this is a basic need of all living things and no one can survive without water and everybody needs water for household activities. Secondly, Technical advancements are taking place day by day as most of the innovations innovations " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">are based on electricity that raises the need for more production of electricity. As a consequent, freshwater is the main element that that " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">is required for producing electricity such as big Dams hold huge amount of water to generate energy in the electric power plants. that is why the level of underground water is going down with the passage of time. Finally, cultivation of crops is an important cause as irrigation of crops crops " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">is done by freshwater for their healthy growth. Hence, ground water water " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">is pumped with the help of engines.
On the other hand, alongwith the causes of rising demand of water, there are some solution that can help in saving fresh water sources. First of all, water is renewable natural resource and can be used for other purposes after renewing. To be more specific rain water water " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">can be used for irrigation then there would be no need to use ground water. Besides this, For the development of country launching innovations is significant; however, today there is great need for protecting natural resources. so, the use of freshwater freshwater " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">should be decreased for upcoming generations otherwise they would be deprived from a natural resources like water, soil, trees, coal and many more. Apart from this, if there will be awareness among people people " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">regarding saving water, then people would collaborate to save water resources such as oceans, rivers and ponds and the most important one is ground water.
To conclude, Although there are some causes of high demand for freshwater yet i believe by creating awareness among people and collaboration of govenment and public can save water for next generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, apart from, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 13.1623246493 236% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2700.0 1615.20841683 167% => OK
No of words: 474.0 315.596192385 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69620253165 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.77456996851 2.80592935109 135% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436708860759 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 775.8 506.74238477 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.8322813926 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.823529412 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8823529412 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52941176471 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146539764489 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717309844805 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602077227175 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141050787005 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567901027693 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.