Increasing environmental issues are continuously being ignored by people. In spite of adapting some changes in their lifestyle, masses are contributing more in contaminating atmosphere. This essay will discussion two prime causes behind this global problem and some remedial measure to put a cap on it.
There are two major reasons why humans are contributing to environmental damage. One of them is use and throw culture which is followed by todays generation. It can be seen often that youngsters try to follow contemporary fashion trends and keep their wardrobes updated with latest trendy clothes. Similarly, most of the masses love to have new versions of cellphones in their pockets. They not only buy them but also change them when new versions come in markets, and they are more likely to throw their used clothes and gadgets. As a consequence,by wasting more plastic and using more units of energy, they are giving rise to global warming which is one of the most pressing environmental issue worldwide.
To continue with, another reason for this is people do not prefer to live inconvenient life.Gone are the days when there were fewer facilities and less pollution could be seen. Nowadays, everyone wants comfort. Due to this, people use natural resources such as oil and water in huge amount. Consequently, It is predicted by scientists that soon we will run out of fossil fuels which can put human survival into trouble.
Despite these above mentioned reasons, there are some measures to tackle with this issue. Firstly, governing bodies should encourage people to use less natural resources by arranging various awareness campaigns in cities and towns. Secondly, by teaching young people to recycle and re use old items, this issue can be solved and this can be done by their parents and teachers.
To conclude, It appears that today's materialistic generation can even cost environment in getting comfort but this is time for masses to accept transformations in the ways they have been living and spoiling their beloved environment.
- The length of the working week does not reflect modern lifestyle needs It should be substantially reduced to give people more leisure time and time with their families How far do you agree with this statement 84
- Despite the environmental concerns raised by scientists people are not changing their lifestyle Why so What should be done to encourage the people in order to save environment 95
- It is better to learn the way people lived in the past through films and video records than written documents To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Many people prefer to communicate with their online friends than to socialise with people in their local communities Do you think it s has more advantages or disadvantages 89
- The length of the working week does not reflect modern lifestyle needs It should be substantially reduced to give people more leisure time and time with their families How far do you agree with this statement 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
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Message: Did you mean 'see' or 'be seen'?
Suggestion: see; be seen
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Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , by
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Gone
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun facilities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17824773414 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80451400127 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607250755287 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7975111917 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.823529412 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180418999787 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510164013219 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395709698301 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934861477202 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452426316771 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.