No one can deny, nowadays, people tremendously keen about getting information about everything what happen in the whole world. Presently, their are numerous mode available for get the knowledge, newspapers and internet method are one of them. Some proportion of masses reckon that, internet is the best source of getting information. Apart from this, few people believed newspaper is effective mode for getting information. According to my perception, Newspaper is cheaper method in order to get knowledge. Internet mode, however, is faster method to proved the reliable information.
To commence with, in this era, people want to get more information about latest facts and figures. So, people used numerous method according to their preferences. For example, some people read the newspapers, some people used the internet and some people used other modes of information. Although, modern modes of media proved the information in very less time, few people give the preference to read newspaper in order to getting knowledge. Newspaper is traditional mode of media and today generation are not interested to read it. Mostly, elderly age people read the newspapers. Apart from this, newspaper is cheaper mode of media, it is affordable for those persons who live below poverty line. Those masses are not able to pay the expanses of internet and other sources of media, so it is effective for impoverished people to getting knowledge. According to me, newspaper is outdated method of get information. Today, people have a hectic schedule, so they do not have enough time to read newspaper.
Furthermore, majority of people give the preference to get the knowledge though the modern method of media. Nowadays, each and every person have a smart gadgets like mobile phones, laptops, computer and many more and they all proved the internet facilities. So, with the help of technology people able to getting information about whole world anywhere and anytime. For example, the numerous news channels do the live telecast of news on the spot and people able to watched that news at the same time. It is the fastest mode of get the knowledge as well as people able to watched the video and here the audio clips. According to my opinion, internet source is the best source for get information in very less time.
To conclude, newspaper is a traditional method to getting information, but young generation and not interested to
read the newspaper. On the other hand, internet proved the news in very less time and we able to watch the video.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, so, well, apart from, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2122.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10096153846 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73651464258 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.418269230769 0.561755894193 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 688.5 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7067982031 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.4166666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.79166666667 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29987749272 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101080946379 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630963322605 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163791035162 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805641796764 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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