Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the World, particularly in their contribution to global warming.Why is global warming a problem?What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?
Endengering our planet in specific case such as global warming is one of the big problem which is caused by some of the developed nations. However, as a humankind we should have consciousness to our natural condition. I personally believe, there are several problems and some practical steps can be solved.
Perhaps, one larger worriment we ought to contemplate is that the imbalancing of the temperature and the our climate which is the huge considerateness due to the successive of higher heath nowadays. Theoritically, as long as it is produced with the carbon and other harmful emission gas, it can make the air quality to be worse. Moreover, this pollution level may bring about the various of respiratory problem, such as asthma, cough, and lung alergy which is unhealthy to people to breath. other problem is that appearing the depletion of the ozon layers of the earth atmosphere can be obvious to foresee the melting level of the south and north poles. If the snow was gone, those would cause numerous impacts in the wildlife ecosystem and their habitat. For example, penguins and polar bears will become extinct.
Turning to possible solutions, the biggest step would be to improve by reducing the amount of the carbon dioxide and other gases in trapping heat on the planet is that the increasing of the developed country sensitifity to the restoring of oxigent level must be applied from the diminishing of the deforestation cases. It is undeniable fact that wherever rain forest is becoming the center of lung to our planet, the disertification should firmly to be controled, particularly the wood production in Amazon, United States. Overseeing can be enforced by managing between trees where those are ready to be cut and those are still growing. Furthermore, Inventing the new technology for developed country is mandatory thing to create the alternatives energy which can be friendly to our circumstances. Not only does the replacement fuel contain of lower carbon emission, but also it consits of the biomass energy, geothermal energy, and hydroelectric energy sources. Perhaps, those can be used in throughout the world as the eco-fuel to all transportations, such as car, bus, motorbike, and truck.
Overall, I perceive that the diminishing of exhausted fumes should be managed with the strict supervision in the forest and the creating of the alternative fuels is also the most effective way which can reduce global warming.
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- Some people believe that giving aid to poorer countries has more negative effects than positive effects To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- The consumption of the resources on the earth is increasing at an alarming rate and above a dangerous level What are the causes of this What can be done to reduce it 89
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- The government should allocate more funding to teaching sciences rather than other subjects in order to for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree? 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2058.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.145 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9402380856 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9131195709 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.625 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24466157622 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687040694225 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587559536752 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150605642703 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502614199059 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.