In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impacts of ageing populations
Nowadays, the increase of average life expectancy is considered as a matter in many developed countries. There are several impacts of this trend, and effective solutions need to be taken to address these potential problems.
To begin with, the rise of ageing populations is likely to lead to some negative effects on society. Firstly, people live longer and populations in industrial countries grow older. This would lead to a growth of retired people who will receive pension after leaving their work. As a result, there would be a reduction of young populations who are major workforce. Secondly, elderly people need to be ensured with health care services. Consequently, working adults may have tax burden. Moreover, due to ageing population increases, young people have to stay at home to take care of their elder people which may increase burden. Therefore, this problem may lead to the reduction of population growth.
Several effective solutions should be proposed to tackle the increase of average life expectancy. First, the government should raise the retirement age so that people who are working may have to retire later. This would help raise the state of worker’s pension. Consequently, people can save more money for their pension, which could reduce taxpayers in paying for health care. Moreover, it is necessary for the government to fund for medical research which might create medical advances in helping people to stay healthy and work for longer. Finally, because there would be an imbalance between young and old population, government should have population balanced policy. This can be done by encouraging people to have more children.
In conclusion, explosion of aging population is caused by many reasons, and several solutions need to be taken to solve this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3031358885 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72771342823 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543554006969 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5054639914 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5555555556 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9444444444 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251261138113 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810412613077 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536394895696 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178457718806 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417085383161 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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