In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problem will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing population.
In the last century, an important increase in the average life expectancy has been seen, but this does not only bring good news. This essay will discuss the main problems that longer life duration may cause for people and societies while proposing plausible solutions to cut its negative impact.
The longer average life expectancy does not always come, in fact, with better health conditions: often times older people have major health issues that need medical surveillance. Consequently, they live longer but in worse conditions, and a number of resources are used to take care of them. For example, sometimes hospitals accommodate elderly people for months, even years, and they use every resource they have to keep them alive. As it might seem right, it has to be noted that aggressive treatment does more harm than good on old people and it exploits healthcare supplies. One different problem is the growing old of societies, both because of longer hope for life and the scarcity of births. In Italy, the increase in age of people is making the society move toward a future of old governors, while younger generations either leave the country or do not have the financial possibilities to procreate.
Among all the solutions that could be found, the investment in bettering life conditions could help sooth the problem discussed above. In the long run, actions should be taken by the Government Administration to improve the quality of the food people eats and air people breathe, as those represent the foundations of good health. If diseases' rate drops, elderly people could take advantage of their longer life expectancy by not being a burden for society, but an important resource of pieces of advice. On the other hand, when it comes to the need for rejuvenating the community, incentives such as economic bonuses could be given to couples to help them feel more financially supported when deciding to take a baby into the world.
To conclude, in the developed world, where societies are growing older, the focus should be put on healthcare for the elders and financial support for younger families.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, so, while, as to, for example, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04285714286 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64081156357 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.0055686355 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.769230769 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9230769231 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257081590354 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887666062054 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577258971069 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16849162885 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493270974253 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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