In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
It is mentioned that there can be seen an upward trend in average life expectancy in our developed world. This trend can cause problems for both society and individuals. However, some solutions can be adapted to tackle the aging population problem.
Growth of average life expectancy due to developments that occurred globally can yield in some difficulties. After some time the number of retired people who are out of work will flourish which means the decline in fresh workforce. this trend puts pressure on governments since they have to not only work with less employees in various fields, but also should make for retirement pension of this old population. Besides, old people are always prone to various kinds of illnesses, such as blood pressure or diabetes. controlling these illnesses as well as paying their costs puts a heavy burden on shoulder of healthcare system. Finally, young generation are the ones who has to endure majority of these difficulties. they have to work harder as the scarce ready workforce, pay more taxes to cover the expenses of the governments, take care of their old parents and their children simultaneously. thus it may be much harder to find work-life balance and this way they may burn out immediately.
considering above mentioned problems, some measures can be taken to mollify the devastating effects of life expectancy. Countries should open the doors to emigrants. some countries such as Ethiopia or Surya are engrossed in famine or war problems. Welcoming emigrants from these countries not only can provide other nations with refresh workforce, but also can help people who comes from underprivileged countries to do not endure starvation or indigence. Apart from that, governments should incite in countries that are threatened by the problem of aging population to have baby. considering appropriate pregnancy leave, baby allowance and other kinds of bonus can increase young people motivation to have baby. In long term this trend causes the young generation population to overtake the elder ones which can ameliorate the impact of growing old population.
to make a conclusion, growing life expectancy has turn out to be a global concern which puts much more tension on governments, health care system and young generation. whereas, there are some solution such as welcoming emigrants or inciting young people to have a baby which can ease this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, however, if, may, so, thus, well, whereas, apart from, as to, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2026.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22164948454 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82928654714 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523195876289 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 633.6 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0698140749 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.3 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248316636733 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788954149164 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740024037169 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171604976639 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950751066055 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.