In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
Recently, the issue of longevity has become the subject of heated debate. There are several problems caused by this phenomenon, such as a lack of people of working age, and various measures could be taken to alleviate this issue, including implementing immigration-friendly policies. In this essay, I will explain the problems stemming from this undesirable trend and present some solutions to the problem.
It seems difficult to deny that several related problems can be anticipated as the average life span in developed countries has increased. Perhaps the most pressing problem is that having a huge number of elderly populations causes these nations to have difficulty earning vast sums of public money from citizens. To be more specific, this trend places a heavy burden on younger citizens given that they are forced to pay an astronomical amount of tax money for supporting the eldery, leading the economy to collapse. Another grave issue is that there will be more people of retirement age who will have the right to receive a pension.
There are, however, several courses of action that the government could take to address the problems described above. The most practical solution to this problem is that the government should encourage a multitude of young foreigners to emigrate. If a country gives permanent residency visas to foreigners skilled at a multitude of fields where there is a lack of workforce, they will be more likely to become motivated. This makes it possible for them to devote a huge amount of time and energy to contributing to the development of the country. A second feasible solution would be for the government to extend the retirement age for working adults, perhaps from 65 to 70. Nowadays, people of this age tend to be healthy enough to continue a productive working life, and this will contribute to a rise in the number of taxpayers.
In conclusion, although it does not seem straightforward to handle the aforementioned problems, these problems can be tackled with a variety of steps to some extent. If the authorities make an effort, we can combat the problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0838150289 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88934236607 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543352601156 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8588621123 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.266666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0666666667 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311711971399 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955451201552 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062105530723 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178706598328 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722020898212 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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