In developing countries, children in rural communities have less access to education. Some people believe that the problem can be solved by providing more schools and teachers, while others think that the problem can be solved by providing computers and Internet access. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is true that children in remote areas have less access to education. While some people believe that this issue can be solved by installing more computers and internets access, I would agree with the argument that providing new schools and teachers is the top priority.
On the one hand, installing computers and internets has advantages to some extent. Firstly, it provides children with a large number of applications and software. Therefore, children who live in remote communities are able to study without teachers’ support. As a result, they can save the time and do other things instead of going to school. Secondly, as Internet provides children with a gigantic source of information, children will look for information in almost all fields, such as History, Science, Math. They can also enroll in some courses or participate in webinars hosted by prestigious universities without facing any geographical constraints.
On the other hand, I am of the opinion that providing new schools and teachers is more feasible. First of all, schools can create an academic environment where children socialize and interact with other people. Besides that, they will become a well-disciplined person when studying in an environment with many regulations as school. Moreover, as teachers are well-trained and they may have effective teaching methods. Therefore, they can identify the weakness of students and pay more attention to help them catch up with their peers. Last but not least, studying with teachers will arouse students’ inspiration and motivation/ teachers can be a source of motivation for students. They will feel never bored when studying any subjects.
In conclusion, although installing computers and internets can make education accessible to children, it seems to me that providing new schools and teachers is the best way to tackle the problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37074829932 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94257006535 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578231292517 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3659190122 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6875 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6875 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377965021007 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114982247082 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949735281806 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262918472412 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.098535626762 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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