development in technology has brought various environmental problems. some people believe that people need to live simpler lives to solve environmental problems. other, however, believe technology is the way to solve these problems. discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The 20th century has witnessed a significant change in technological developments and their impact on the environment. Some people argue that the solution for environmental problems is to simplify the lifestyle, while others believe that technology development could bring solutions, with which I agree. This essay will elaborate on both views and my personal perspective.
On the one hand, some people hold a notion that adopting a lifestyle that is focusing on basic necessities may solve ongoing environmental issues by reducing the amount of energy consumed. It is common knowledge that the majority of environmental problems come from the amount of toxic waste emitted while using daily energy and the operation of industrial fields. For example, if society simplifies their lives, the energy consumption may decrease, the number of products also lessens due to the reduction in demands. This may bring less pressure on the environment but also can reduce life quality and development, which is not always accepted.
On the other hand, I endorse the second notion that technological developments could bring resolutions. As the revolution in the energy industry, the creation of new forms of energy and efficient solutions led to a better use of resources with a minimized emissions and impact on environments. For instance, renewable energy including solar and wind allow a new way in electrical generation without concerns of pollution. In addition, technology can introduce innovations that help mitigate pollution and new waste management. This may solve the problems and not reduce life qualities.
To conclude, the idea of living simpler is one way to minimize the ecosystem problems among a group of people. The developments in technology could bring more benefits on human life while reducing the impact on the environment. From my point of view, people should use energy resources economically at the same time to apply technological developments to protect the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...dopting a lifestyle that is focusing on basic necessities may solve ongoing environmental issues ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45161290323 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09567184681 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541935483871 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.931274293 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312878806926 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100842468798 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819494408377 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206202222266 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930863329913 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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