Dieting can change a person’s life for the better or ruin one’s health completely. What is your opinion?
Eating is one of the most basal human needs. In other word, searching for food -whether healthy or not- to satisfy hunger is an original human instinct. In this article, I will show you how is the dietary choices affect humans’ life in both directions.
Let’s start with the bright side of the image, healthy food carries lots of benefits to the person. For instance, feeding on the proper diet and providing the body with essential elements enhance the capabilities of the man to resist infectious diseases, as well give him sort of protection against cardiovascular disorders. Being healthy is something crucial for our practical and social lives.
In addition, psychological health is also affected by dietary habits. Excessive coffee intake shall cause extra stress and insomnia. On the other hand, fresh fruits and vegetables help in inducing calmer sleepiness. Furthermore, eating unpleasant uninviting food - even if healthy one- shall cause psychological upset.
Dietary habits differ from country to another. Some studies have focused on the humans’ life span from different countries. Had it been for healthy sea food, the Japanese people could not have been reached to such longest ages in comparison to other nationalities. On the contrary, excessive utilization of unhealthy fast food in USA leads to surge in obesity as well diabetes indices among the children and teenagers. Obesity usually represents improper diet, and always complicated with other many physical and psychiatric disorders.
Recent decades have witnessed deeper attention to the effect of dietary habits upon humans’ lives. Nevertheless the advances in medical field, the scientists cannot come up with the ideal diet regimen.
In conclusion, food can be either bless or curse depend on the way we use it. Being moderate person shall guarantee gaining most of the benefits and avoiding most of the side effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, sort of, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43666666667 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82376391985 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2170014076 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8421052632 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7894736842 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94736842105 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164866800693 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441440462258 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354957943396 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772871691438 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028302251845 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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