The disadvantage of working abroad
Good morning everyone, I'm Quynh, from group 6. I'm going to talk about the disadvantages of working abroad. The first one is the high cost of living. You may already know that a high salary means a high cost of living. Especially in developed countries, of course, it also depends on each country. You can look up at the slide. Here are some comparison examples of food prices in Vietnam and Korea, data from the end of 2020. If you don't know, 1000 won= VND. Not to mention, before you can work abroad, you have to pay a fee to apply for a Visa, airfare, after working abroad, you will have to pay more personal income tax. The second one is culture shock, because maybe your understanding of another country's culture just stops at stereotypes, sometimes a misconception. Culture shock is also the difficulty of adapting to a new living situation: a new cuisine with strange, unpalatable dishes and you may not like them; The weather can be too cold or too hot. Winter in Canada can drop to -33°C, with snowfall. The pace of life is too fast or too slow, making you withdraw, not wanting, and having no one to share. The next one is a different language barrier that allows you to learn a new language, but sometimes it becomes a barrier for you. For example, when you are in a group discussion, no one can understand what you say and you also have a hard time understanding what other people say. Finally, I am homesick and feel lonely. Certainly, going to another country without relatives or friends, geographically separated by tens, even hundreds of thousands of kilometers, along with work pressure makes you feel anxious and frustrated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, may, second, so, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64948453608 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67368969269 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60824742268 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.1874642769 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5882352941 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1176470588 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140363662727 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490060953779 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132186295885 0.0667982634062 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140363662727 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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