Some people choose to have their first child at an older age.
What are the reasons?
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Recently, the trend of having babies later has increasingly become common, driven primarily by economic, and educational factors. While this shift may contribute to a more stable economic life for families and better upbringing for the children, I believe the drawbacks regarding health and population issues are more significant.
The primary reasons for delaying parenthood are closely linked to urbanisation and education. First, when people relocate to cities, the cost of living increases and life accelerates. Consequently, many individuals prioritise career advancement to achieve financial security before having children. This approach allows them to provide their kids with more resources and a more stable upbringing. Second, there is a direct correlation between education and women's fertility. The longer they stay in education, the later they typically become parents. Besides, it is a perspective of parents nowadays that they should be well-educated and experienced in parenting knowledge and skills before giving birth. Together, these factors contribute to the rising popularity of delayed parenthood.
Having children later can provide several benefits. Parents often have more time to prepare financially and acquire essential parenting skills, which reduces health risk associated with pregnancy. Besides, raising and educating a child is complex and requires not only emotional maturity but also a stable income. However, this also presents challenges to both individuals and society. As women age, the difficulties associated with pregnancy increase. Many require some medical interventions such as In vitro fertilization (IVF) treatment to lead to pregnancy - which can be prohibitively expensive. Besides, this trend contributes to an aging population which fosters potential impacts on workforce demographics; there would be fewer working people to support both the elderly and younger generations. An older demographic may stifle innovation, as they may be less inclined to invest in new ideas for the future.
In conclusion, the increasing popularity of giving birth later in life is largely influenced by financial and educational considerations. In my view, this trend brings more concerns for both parents and society as a whole, particularly regarding population sustainability and societal innovation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...and better upbringing for the children, I believe the drawbacks regarding health ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, regarding, second, so, well, while, as for, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90560471976 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12327461019 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628318584071 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5758343272 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.1 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.95 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101958467197 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0284731048733 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0272989549634 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0504853068955 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448530260304 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.7 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.58 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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