disadvantages for children when using the internet
Many children nowadays use social networking sites to contact others without the interference of their parents. Allowing your children to use the internet without parental supervision, on the other hand, exposes them to possible danger, and parents should take steps to keep their children safe.
One of the most serious issues that unsupervised access causes for youngsters all across the world is that they may share information with individuals they shouldn't. Publishing personal information carries the risk of revealing identifiable information that could lead to the child's whereabouts being revealed to criminals, or open up the possibility of minors sharing their parents' financial information online. Another problem is the child's exposure to cyberbullying, which is a type of online harassment that can take place in chat rooms, on social networking platforms, or over email or text messages. If your child has unsupervised access, he or she may become the bully or the victim. This type of bully is gaining traction, and recent suicides have horrified the public.
As a result, one solution to this troubling situation is for parents to pay attention to their children and regulate their internet usage. Parents must work together to educate children about the dangers of sharing information online and to teach them the basics of online interaction. Another tangible way that they can do is to employ software to limit their children's internet access. Parents monitoring their children's online activities may also be able to help solve the situation by communicating in a nice manner so that the youngster can tell his or her parents about any problems he or she may be having.
To summarize, while it is undeniable that unsupervised access causes significant problems, it is unquestionably possible to begin to address these problems and use the internet in a more constructive way. Parents must take the initiative in addressing this issue by adopting some solutions mentioned above, or else many young people's lives will be disrupted.
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- Topic In some countries parents expect children to spend long time studying in and after school and have less free time Do you think it has positive or negative effects on children and society that they live in 89
- Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading To what extent do you agree Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer 84
- The computer is widely used in education and some people think that teachers will not play important roles in the classroom To what extent do you agree 78
- disadvantages for children when using the internet 84
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...share information with individuals they shouldnt. Publishing personal information carrie...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of online interaction. Another tangible way that they can do is to employ softwa...
^^
Line 5, column 505, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a nice manner" with adverb for "nice"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...lp solve the situation by communicating in a nice manner so that the youngster can tell his or h...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, while, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33538461538 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91629334325 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569230769231 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.1729553025 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.384615385 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175789249597 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673510347372 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069516652067 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114711209301 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748467768875 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...share information with individuals they shouldnt. Publishing personal information carrie...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of online interaction. Another tangible way that they can do is to employ softwa...
^^
Line 5, column 505, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a nice manner" with adverb for "nice"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...lp solve the situation by communicating in a nice manner so that the youngster can tell his or h...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, while, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33538461538 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91629334325 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569230769231 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.1729553025 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.384615385 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175789249597 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673510347372 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069516652067 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114711209301 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748467768875 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.