Topic: In some countries, parents expect children to spend long time studying in and after school and have less free time. Do you think it has positive or negative effects on children and society that they live in?
It is an undeniable fact that parental influence plays a vital role in children’s life. Some parents take advantage of this thinking and rather their youngsters to spend their time for educational purpose and cut down the time for relaxation. Although this may offer some benefits, I believe the drawbacks are relatively high for the foreseeable future.
On the one hand, having children to pay their full attention on studying is definitely beneficial in certain cases. First and foremost, only with the help of knowledge can they develop the quality of being sucessful people and gainning a prominent future. For instance, it is likely that youngsters’ having made a concerted efford in studying would have had a lucrative income in their line of work later on. Secondly, spending less free time equals reducing the risk of children being exposed to the Internet, hopefully leading to an absence of problems such as cyberbullying, truancy and even delinquency.
On the other hand, I would argue that these benefits are outweighted by the negative effects. Putting children under extreme pressure by forcing them to take intensive courses or continuous assessments may put them on the high threshold of boredom. People speculate this might be due to the fact that there appears to be a large scale of pupils having difficulties with their metal health. Furthermore, it is because of the lack of free time that some pupils’s cognitive development is being declined, which generally may result in the paucity of transferable skills and lateral thinking.
In conclusion, for the reasons indicated above, it is obvious to acknowledge the positive implicantions of this problem and the negative benefits of parents putting stressness on children through education should also be regarded as at least as severe.
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- The computer is widely used in education and some people think that teachers will not play important roles in the classroom To what extent do you agree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al health. Furthermore, it is because of the lack of free time that some pupils’s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, at least, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24742268041 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90036400051 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60824742268 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.982711123 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.25 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238681750532 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785386631828 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500968935866 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138014448878 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040853409168 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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