Disadvantages of social media
Media platform has considerable advantages on our daily life. But on the other hand, there exists some undeniable downside. First and foremost, it makes us suffer from a deficiency in emotional connection. If engrossing in social media, we will find it more and more difficulties in expressing our emotion in the real life as technology is developing, we can have a conversation through social media but unable to sense the emotion or enthusiasm from the other person. Second but important, cyberbullying. In this day and ages, many people, particularly children, have become a victim of cyberbullying because of the development of the Internet. Since a clone account can be created without being controlled, anyone can be bullied. Menace, terrorization, hearsay that produce discomfort and chaos in the society. Last but not least, it reduces family closeness. In these days, everyone has their own smartphone. They surf their Facebook, Twitter instead of together watching a film, have a conversation by Messenger instead of talking face-to-face.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Media platform has considerable advantag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, thus, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 164.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40853658537 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17309363248 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.713414634146 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.8947386915 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6363636364 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9090909091 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140367914659 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330096524148 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740090940485 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140367914659 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.