Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?
The punishment children are one of the controversial issues. Some people consider that teachers have charge of disciplining their students. However, others believe that children should punish by their parents. In my opinion, I argue that both parents and teacher have the rights to discipline for their children.
There are so many reasons why teachers should punish their students. Discipline children are one of the ways to educate that many teachers should do for their children. For example, most parents do not have the time to teach their children learning so that their time spend going school as well as being exposed to studying with teachers more than. Punishment will help children focusing on each lesson of their teachers. This is to teach them how to respect their teachers as well as other people. Thanks to, children will become a responsible person and useful to society as well as their family.
Another point parents play an important role in both education and daily life on their children. Because only they have the right parenthood and charge of the children’s behavior especially their children under 18 years old. Therefore, discipline problems are avoided by society’s vices. Nowadays, developed countries have many vices such as crime, theft, which are easier to attract by evil people. So that, parents need to teach them as well as punishment them strictly. However, parents should not too strict with them, leading to children will scare their parents.
In conclusion, in my viewpoint, I think the punishment should be by teacher and parents, but they need to work closely with together as a temporary solution to teach children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18081180812 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64142213175 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527675276753 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4818291248 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5882352941 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165497118983 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688325336695 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058677145982 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126767736705 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451362416721 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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