Discuss the benefits and drawbacks of using to the Internet in our activities
Moving towards the 21st century, many people are nowadays expressing a deeply growing concern about the role of the Internet in our modern life. In fact, there are some who hold firmly to their belief that the Internet has a great contribution to our lives. However, others argue convincingly that the Internet affects our lives in negative ways. Therefore, some arguments both for and against this issue will be addressed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, there are two main points for people to defend the former argument that using the Internet brings several advantages to our daily activities. The most obvious example to prove is that the Internet makes people closer than in the past. It is a well-documented fact that a Vietnamese student being abroad to study in the USA can easily keep in touch with his parents in Vietnam via chatting on the Internet or making video calls. Furthermore, there is no doubt that it gives us instant access to information on almost any subject. For instance, the research used to be a very hectic and time taking process. Now with a single click of a mouse, a researcher is able to draw dozens of conclusions.
On the other hand, there are two primary pieces of evidence for people to support the latter argument. First and foremost, it is commonly accepted that the excessive use of the Internet badly impacts the psychology and mind of individuals. A clear example to prove is that Internet addiction creates the problems of social isolation and disturbance in relations. The young people have no respect for society, social values, and elders in society. Equally important, there is no denying that the misuse of the Internet brings a number of problems health. This is supported by the fact that Internet addiction had forced us to stay on bed and do all things online. It has created severe complications with our health as well, like stress, uncertainty, lack of peace and other diseases.
All things considered, it is my strong belief that the crucial of the Internet in our activities. Accordingly, I strongly recommend the governments should enhance people's awareness in terms of how to use the Internet effectively. If this recommendation is carried out, the comprehensive development of our future generation will be ensured.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 448, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
..., social values, and elders in society. Equally important, there is no denying that the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in fact, no doubt, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80787033618 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57180156658 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1608173662 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.75 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.15 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224641784356 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684015973333 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512618242174 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14792117435 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211655870122 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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