Discuss the benefits and drawbacks of pet ownership for animals and for the community as a whole
Moving towards the 21st century, many people are nowadays expressing a deeply growing concern about pet ownership. In fact, there are some who hold firmly to their belief that it has positive impacts on the pets as well as society. However, others argue convincingly that the negative effects outweigh the positive side. Therefore, some arguments both for and against this issue will be addressed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, there are two main points for people to defend the former argument owning pets has plenty of advantages to the animals and the community. It is a well-documented fact that the pets are well-fed on their own. The obvious example to prove is that people provide a warm shelter, including sufficient food, water, toys, and special equipment to the pets. Furthermore, there is no doubt that having a pet reduces the number of crimes committed by a vulnerable mind and mental illness patients. It also helps the owners relieve their stress and build up a positive attitude.
Despite the fact that people gain the benefits of adopting pets, but there are two primary evidences for people to support the opposite arguments. First and foremost, it is commonly accepted that keeping animals is a cruel way of taking their freedom. Actually, the ways humans live are different from animals do, so they are not able to understand the pets' feelings which may cause mistreated and abusive behaviors. Moreover, there is no denying that pet owners have to deal with the high expense of raising dogs and cats. This is supported by the fact that the food, medical fees, and veterinary bills cost a huge sum of money, thus the household budget is definitely affected.
All things considered, it is my strong belief that having a pet brings more advantages to the owners and the society as well. Accordingly, I highly recommend the governments should enhance people's awareness in terms of raising dogs and cats. If this recommendation is carried out, the comprehensive development of our society will be ensured.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, in fact, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03244837758 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68229035786 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598820058997 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6966814936 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.352941176 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173790293664 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047444580344 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483868330194 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984416231306 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436964222532 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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