discuss both the positive and negative aspects of mobile
phones.
It is undoubtedly true that the mobile phone is one of humanity's most important inventions in the last few decades and it has a great impact on the modern lifestyle. Consequently, cellphone brings both benefits and drawbacks that can be discussed in detail
On the one hand, there is a variety of advantages that cellular phones have. First of all, it is a huge source of entertainment. In appears to be shreds of evidence that these cutting-edge devices are good ways for hectic people to unwind and re-energize themselves after a nerve-racking day. For instance, there is a multitude of games to download and play. Secondly, when it comes to communication, the easiness and convenience of a mobile phone should not be underestimated. The wireless appliances allow people to be in contact with most of the world's population as long as there is a signal. By way of illustration, people from several countries can keep in touch with each other through an international telephone call or texting using social networks such as facebook or twitter. Lastly, the digital telephone is user-friendly. This device is not bulky and can surely fit the pocket, purse or bag. It means people can bring them everywhere they go without effort. The telephones are gradually improved that even low-tech person including infants or the elderly can use them. Furthermore, In the event of an accident, injury, criminal incident, or other emergencies, mobile phones ensure that emergency services, as well as family and friends, can be contacted immediately
Nevertheless, the cellular phones still can have negative effects on our life. In the first place, the mobile phone can be addictive. This is shown by more and more people overuse their phones for the purpose of surfing webs or using the social network. It is allegedly that cellphone is the underlying reason for some disorders. Insomnia, stress or even depression, to mention but a few. Secondly, the mobile phone may be exploited by criminals. The blackmailer is a good case in point. Moreover, cyberbullies have emerged among the teenager and this is seemingly one of the main reason for teenage suicide. Last but not least, people may lose their privacy by using a telephone. One consequence of the prevalence of photo and video technology found on mobile phones is that personal privacy has become harder to maintain. In almost any public situation there is the possibility of being photographed or filmed and usually end up in the public domain via social media.
Overall, mobile phones can be a great source of entertainment, a convenient way of communication due to its user-friendly. However, there are some drawbacks hidden inside the telephone including cyber-crimes, loss of privacy or being addicted to them
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- some say that because many people are living much longer the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants Why do you think people waste food What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away 61
- What are the factors that cause stress and how to cope with stress? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 550, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...eople to be in contact with most of the worlds population as long as there is a signal...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, well, for instance, such as, as well as, first of all, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2325.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 453.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13245033113 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01198576409 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534216335541 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 747.0 506.74238477 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5997985608 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.12 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0254429123979 0.244688304435 10% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00598964865982 0.084324248473 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0229993184818 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0266889339341 0.151304729494 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373967254728 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 78.4519038076 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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