The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies rather than on positive developments is harmful to the individuals and the society as a whole.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Broadcastings in the various source of media these days allegedly have excessive emphasize on nerve-wracking issues as well as worrisome circumstances rather than the hopeful prospects of the modern community. Hence, this trend is believed to be extremely detrimental to each individual as well as the whole society. From my perspective, I find no justification against this belief.
On the one hand, there is irrefutable that negative news reports in the media may have some adverse impacts on each individual. One fundamental hazard is that it may fulfil people with pessimistic thoughts. It does not seem unreasonable to suggest that watching numerous bad news in the long terms may result in creating a terrible and untrue scenario within the audience's mind, thereby attributing to making these miserable people live with the fear of being robbed or murdered. Consequently, having such a stressful life is extremely detrimental to one's psychological well-being. By the way of exemplifying, according to a scientific experiment, the individuals who watched the pessimistic news revealed being progressively on edge and more troubled than those who observed either the positive or unbiased counterparts.
On the other hand, concerning the societal aspects, since those individuals who had watched the pessimistic news invested more energy pondering and their overthinking lead them to be in constant worry, their productivity and striving for work is undoubtedly diminished, which later damage the economy and various other professional fields. An illustration of this is that several people are misinterpreted by the pervasive news about inadequate hygiene victuals then lose faith about restaurants and food stalls, which ultimately lead to the bankruptcy of these businesses. Furthermore, bad news may take responsibility for the loss of confidence in the government, hence, are the major culprit of increasing crime rates.
In conclusion, excessive emphasizing on bad news may result in people living in fear as well as other mental illness due to distress and tension. Meanwhile, they bring pernicious impacts on the economy as well as responsible for the rising in crime rates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, then, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53869047619 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2099162872 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589285714286 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.4616120017 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.153846154 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8461538462 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11701309185 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385384259854 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377840874443 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0657361677555 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304154533152 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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