With divorce rates and family breakdown increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families are not closed as it used to be.
Discuss the cause of this problem and give possible solution to it
Universally the rates of marriage dissolution and family separation have increased, irrefutably, households are not bonded as it were in time past. This essay will first suggest that the biggest problem leading to this crisis is lack of finance to cater for the home and then summits job creation for couples as the most viable solution.
To begin, lack of finance is the leading cause of family crisis: it is an indisputable fact that money is very crucial in the management of any household. It usefulness is seen in areas such as feeding, renting an apartment, tuition fee and clothing. A situation where neither nor both parties can afford any of the aforementioned necessities due to unemployment can however, distort the peace and harmony in the family thereby leading to separation or divorce. For example, in a survey carried out by the ministry of interior affairs in 2010, 90 percents of divorced couples revealed that their greatest misunderstanding often resulted from monetary issues. Admittedly, this example demonstrates that for families to be united with regular flow of money is essential and vice versa if money is not available.
On the other hand, creating employment opportunities for couples would go a long way to curb this marital menace in the society; this is because family heads would have the income needed to provided for their homes. For example, recently Indian government and some private organizations organized skill acquisition centers for fabric and hair making for women lacking the capacity to support their households thus, helping to reduce conflict in the family.
In conclusion, it is agreeable that marital issues is on the increase nowadays and this is as a result of inadequate finance, it is interesting to note that, creating employment opportunities for couples will help slim the tide of this menace in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17105263158 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90118898159 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595394736842 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.7692206478 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.2 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160814310023 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064340297343 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387937858954 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939372018306 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372165525006 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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