Do you agree that modern technology has given us more leisure time than before?
In recent years, due to the economic development in most countries, modern technology has appeared in nearly all industries and support human’s life significantly. In my case, modern technology brings ample amount of benefits, especially shortening working time and convenient life. However, beside the benefits it also loses some meaningful value, particularly in communication.
First of all, by using technology people probably save ample amount of time to do other necessary works. For instance, instead of sending letter to the post office after writing for a long time and waiting for the other to take it, using technology through social media is definitely faster ( just typing and send directly). Moreover, technology help people saving time on transferring by modern vehicle ( Shinkasen electrical train in Japan) which is more speed by approximately 300 km/h than the normal trains.
On the other hand, adapting the new technology make most people especially teenagers abuse too much and influences considerably their health such as eyesight, nerve, etc. Another point I have to mention is that gradually more people become shy to communicate with others, not only strangers but also their relatives, or even become autism; consequently, it leads to losing some valuable cultures.
In conclusion, modern technology improves the standard of living significantly remarkably saving time; whereas, it also brings some drawbacks. Therefore, each individual should learn how to balance their time between virtual life and real life.
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- Some people think the government should pay for healthcare and education but other people claim that it is the individual’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 78
- Fashion trend are difficult to follow. Some people think that they primarily exist fust to sell clothes so we should not follow them. To what extent do you agree with this opinion? 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61538461538 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92043915573 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688034188034 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3674993801 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.4 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.8 7.06120827912 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205835917125 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802424213807 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572230635325 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115358290829 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511679433297 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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