Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.
There has been a controversy that many media such as television, newspapers, magazines are paying too much attention to the personal lives of renowned people like public figures and celebrities. I personally agree with this statement, the following are the reasons why.
Most celebrities are bound to stick with the media, people get to know more about many celebrities based on the news they read on newspapers or magazines. Apart from the daily updates about their films, shows, or events, most of the time the so called paparazzi are constantly invested in the personal lives of famous people. Paparazzi are likely to follow them everywhere, invading their complete privacy like date nights or sometimes when they are at their own house.
The problem is that not only do the paparazzi spy on every single movements of the Hollywood stars but they also tend to post made up stories on the media to create misunderstandings between the readers and the celebrities themselves. For instance, there was a famous Chinese actress who were being followed by paparazzi 3 years ago on Chinese new year. She was going home with her male best friend which was also her assistant. The thing is the paparazzi do not even acknowledge that her friend is gay and they had the audacity to shame her on every social platforms saying she was cheating with her fiancé. Which lead to the downhill of her whole career for almost a year later even though her team had to clarify the truth.
In conclusion, I think that being a celebrity is sometimes frustrating and not everything goes your way. The media should choose carefully what to put on the internet and respect famous people’s boundaries and have their consent before publishing things up.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 383, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'male the best'.
Suggestion: male the best
...e new year. She was going home with her male best friend which was also her assistant. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, apart from, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92491467577 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65343381599 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61433447099 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1573396114 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.25 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243049516337 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907838273163 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957581864883 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173918944438 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147799780049 0.056905535591 260% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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