Societies would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. Do you agree or disagree?
It is probable that the prohibition on all kinds of advertising would bring beneficial purposes for the societies since it is useless and even cause harm. To a certain extent I disagree with the statement because without advertisements, there will be numerous obstacles to the citizen’s materialistic needs and the government’s tax revenues.
To begin with, there is no denying that advertisements have been one of the crucial tools for the businessman’s success. They create a wild rage of job opportunities for plenty of people. With the help of ads, small organizations will have the ability to make their products reach out to the users. For instance, Samsung has taken the first place in smartphone market from Apple due to their brilliant advertisements, which urges them to focus on quality to maintain their place in the industry. Therefore, when the government put an end to the marketing industry, there will be no chance for millions of employees which leaves a severe impact on their lives. Furthermore, the profits made from a large amount of goods are great contributions to the development of nations and fulfill the government’s tax revenues.
On the other hand, once ads are forbidden, people will be incapable of discovering various useful products or there less shopping choices. In addition, deficient in the tax revenues will exacerbate the society’s prosperity and civilians can endure the unfavorable service in medical and educational aspects.
In conclusion, it is wrong to dismiss the function of advertisements. Aside the annoying, unreliable forms of advertisement, advertising really did its job of boosting the nation’s economy and modernized shopping experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, really, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40823970037 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27560155866 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632958801498 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3535589784 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.333333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170264759208 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520712062247 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051835781949 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099685505261 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624115559157 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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