Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time
For some individuals, it is crucial for them to spend their spare time doing things that they are interested in such as reading or doing word puzzles. On the other hand, other people feel the need to put their mind at ease during times after work. As a matter of fact, I will express my opinions on both statements.
As we all know, free times are time when we are not under the pressure of work or studies, when we have time for ourselves. It varies from one person to another what to do when they are free of work, which is why I think that it should be totally up to them what they want to do to kill their time. Does not matter if it is about physical activities, hobbies, just taking a nap, or letting the mind go completely empty and refreshed.
Some people like hobby-related sort of activities namely puzzles, crosswords, reading, playing instruments etc. which are extremely good for the mind. Thus not only enhance the brain to be more creative but also to satisfy boredom. In contrast others think that after a long, tough day of work or school their minds are messed up and they should let it rest by taking naps or mediate to put the mind at ease, which would later lead to more proficient work.
Overall I agree with both ways people spend their free time whether they are activities that improve one’s mind or just simply let the mind rest
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... which are extremely good for the mind. Thus not only enhance the brain to be more c...
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Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...reative but also to satisfy boredom. In contrast others think that after a long, tough d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, i think, in contrast, sort of, such as, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45019920319 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26523368119 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581673306773 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7766914154 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.545454545 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335387711807 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121807493125 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887003047413 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219834984359 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700375911346 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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