It is a common view that classmates are key to a child's academic accomplishment rather than parents. From my perspective, I am convinced that parents play a pivotal role in a child's success compared to companions, which is largely due to the initial education of parents along with financial and mental support.
First and foremost, parents are deemed as the first trainers of children, which is demonstrated through their crucial lessons. It is widely acknowledged that parents who give birth to children can see through their feelings, behaviors, and even needs to provide moral instructions forming children's dignity. For example, if a child is imparted an example of honesty, he will follow this and become mature with this personality. This is a testament to parents' substantial impact on children's outlooks about their future.
Last but not least, parental monetary and psychological aid is put down to determinants of children's high academic performance. In this modern society, it is obvious that most of the offspring's tuition fees that are required by formal schooling are covered by parents to supply them with adequate facilities. Payment for educational fees is clearly exemplified in studying abroad when a large number of recent research showed that 75% of the gross overseas students have to rely on from - their - parents funds. Furthermore, inspirations given by parents are of considerable help to children when they have difficulties or sorrows.
To sum up, I am firmly of the opinion that the part of parents cannot be underestimated in comparison with peers to reach a desirable result at school on account of the first lessons and comprehensive help in terms of finance and psychology.
- It is very important that children should study hard at school Time spent studying on the Internet is time wasted Do you agree or disagree You should write at least 250 words 92
- People in many countries are spending less time with their family What are the reasons and effects of this 92
- Computers are being used more and more in education Some people say that this is a positive trend while others argue this is leading to negative consequences Discuss both views and give your opinion 95
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child s success in school Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 63
- Nowadays tourism has developed and contributed a significant portion of national income to its own country Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development and give your own opinion 91
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'offsprings'' or 'offspring's'?
Suggestion: offsprings'; offspring's
...society, it is obvious that most of the offsprings tuition fees that are required by forma...
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Line 5, column 386, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...rly exemplified in studying abroad when a large number of recent research showed that 75% of the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, look, so, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04183278302 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629090909091 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.8719020749 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167961526988 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618806035436 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041281197705 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101792149532 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475160235317 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.