Computers are being used more and more in education Some people say that this is a positive trend while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion

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Average: 9.5 (2 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 560, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eir use of technologies is under parents supervision, avoiding excessive use of t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, so, well, while, such as, with regard to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2102.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80662983425 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40339591657 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618784530387 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 668.7 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8559961478 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.375 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203149492164 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054612712014 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504141046131 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100984902455 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438787312885 0.056905535591 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.01 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 78.4519038076 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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