Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products , or is it the responsibility of producers?
The issue of over packaged products has become increasingly important during the last few decades, due to the damage that plastic is causing to the environment. This has raised the question: should we blame the producers or the consumers? In my opinion, the producers should be held responsible.
I believe the producers should be held responsible for the damages for two reasons: first of all, because they are the ones producing materials that cause the whole problem in the first place; and secondly, because they knowingly risk the well-being of the environment in the name of their companies' profits. Furthermore, most consumers, besides ignoring the real threats that plastic waste causes to the environment, sometimes have no option regarding the products that they buy.
Many big companies produce thousands of tons of over packaged goods a year, e.g. junk producers, know that their goods are totally unnecessary. However, they keep on bringing their merchandise out to the market in order to make profits. Also, they are very aware of the damage that their products can cause to the environment since they employ specialized employees such as chemists, who are responsible for reporting to the top executives of the company. Also, most employers have no idea about the deleterious components that plastic packing contains. Moreover, it is debatable if they should have the responsibility of being aware of such matters, since companies sell them the idea that the products they buy are of the highest quality. In addition, many countries in developing countries, for example, have no other option than to buy cheap over packaged junk food.
In conclusion, besides the producers, I think governments should also be held responsible for the damage caused, because they should make sure that these companies that they give permits to actually deliver eco-friendly products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, e.g., first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.6006465487 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.5 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.25 7.06120827912 258% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228580168383 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897778891577 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546649432681 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157516065297 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635911821663 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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