Doctors, nurses and teachers make a great contribution to society and should be paid more than entertainment and sports celebrities. Do you agree or disagree?
Medical professionals and teaching staffs contribute tremendously to the humankind and ought to be pay increased salary than entertainment media and games personalities. In my opinion, I absolutely agree with this statement and consider that doctors, nurses and teachers serve the nation tirelessly, therefore, they should get paid more compared to any other stardum celebrities.
To commence with, health experts and teaching employees invariably provide extremely valuable services to keep human being healthy, stress -free and to make society well educated and utterly independent. In other words, doctors and nurses are continously working to improve the quality of life by stepping towards making life disease free and eventually tension free. Along with this, teachers work unexceptionally hard to educate students and give them career path to achieve excellence in their future. For instance, doctors work regularly for long hours shifts in case of emergency such as, endemic, epidemic or global pandemic. Current global pandemic of corona virus is a obvious example of massive sacrifice and inevitable support to the world.
Another point to consider is that medical students study meticulously for long years to obtain the degree of medicine. For example, in some country, students needs to pass national exam to get admission in renowned college of medical science or in other countries, they have bring excellent grades to secure seats in the medical institution. After admission, students have to study for challenging five years and to get expertise in their profession, further it's take so many years. So, it is justifiable that after numerous years of dedication and work ethic, doctors ought to get pay rise.
Finally, teachers are the roots of a nation that hold the whole tree of educated people so if roots are very strong then tree will be full of strength. To illustrate, great responsibility of teaching staffs is to provide renowned professionals to the nations, starting from basic learning to the professional degree. Therefore, teachers should be liable to get paid high wages in response to their unbeatable contribution in the progress of the country.
In conclusion, I believe that medical, paramedical and teaching staffs have significant contribution in the nation's success and they work extremely hard to achieve the expertise of their profession or provide expertise to students to gain success. Therefore, government should think conscientiously to enforce policies to support them and give high salary to encourage them.
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Suggestion: an
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Suggestion: brought
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Suggestion: nations'; nation's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... give high salary to encourage them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2180.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50505050505 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93953278161 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2414587211 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.25 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178285958838 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05275647435 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551037614593 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100685145807 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749101180864 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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