Dogs are one of the most popular pets in the world, yet many would, yet many would say it is inappropriate to have them in built-up inner-city areas?
Do you agree or disagree?
Now a day’s people are very font of having pets at there home. Some prefer cats some prefer dogs or both or any thing different from that like rabbits or fish or a tortoise. But I think dog would be the best choice for a pet because they are fun loving, loyal and ready to play. Some reaches also found that they can understand our feelings. As I told people love to pet animals but some are also against of them.
Lets talk about dog as a pet they are most loving creatures and some people also find it most helpful in there daily lives. Let take an example a person is blind and he is have a dog as a pet. The dog helps a lot to the blind person it helps him to lead the way. Or is something going wrong around or any situations. Almost all kids love dogs they love to play with them. We often see them everywhere around us.
Talking about everywhere, we can’t have them in built up cities. It’s not good having them in in city areas because there are lots of people leaving near by. Lets take an example a person is living in the building in a city area that has almost 10 floors and 5 families living on each floor. And suddenly in a middle of the night it starts barking and all the people around you are getting disturbed and start complaining about it. And in other case there’s lots of traffic in the city its very risky for them to freely move around.
There a many positive points of have dogs around but on the other hand there are also negative points for having them. I would prefer not to have a dog in build up cities because we don’t now who is been allergic to them or afraid. And what if they bit someone for no reason or bark for no reason it may cause chaos. So I would say its not appropriate for to have them in built-up inner city areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
...prefer cats some prefer dogs or both or any thing different from that like rabbits or fis...
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...s but some are also against of them. Lets talk about dog as a pet they are most l...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
... an example a person is blind and he is have a dog as a pet. The dog helps a lot to ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
... cities. It's not good having them in in city areas because there are lots of pe...
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Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...ecause there are lots of people leaving near by. Lets take an example a person is livin...
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
... of the night it starts barking and all the people around you are getting disturbed and start complai...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, i think, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.1936416185 5.12529762239 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12939888319 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514450867052 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3518517914 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.55 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249332101007 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777872584975 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715688806914 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150704506692 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637804707831 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 50.2224549098 158% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.73 12.4159519038 54% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.35 8.58950901804 74% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.