Dogs are one of the most popular pets in the world, yet many would, yet many would say it is inappropriate to have them in built-up inner-city areas?
Do you agree or disagree?
In today's world, there is a trend to keep a pet or even several of them in a house and the most common pet is a dog. However, dog possession in highly urbanized areas is not easy. I personally believe that flats in blocks of flats are not the best place for a dog to live and in this essay I will support my opinion with examples.
Firstly, unfortunately, a lot of modern residential developments are being built without taking into account the necessity of places for dog walking. Thus, dog owners have to travel considerable distances to the place where it will be possible to let the pet off the leash in order to let it run and play with it.
Secondly, a dog which is kept in an apartment building may cause conflicts between its owner and neighbours. For example, many dog breeds cannot tolerate loneliness and they can howl for many hours in the absence of a master, so this situation can be uncomfortable for neighbours. Furthermore, some dogs have to relieve themselves in public places such as an elevator or an entryway, and their owners do not always want to clean after pets, which also does not contribute to comfortable cohabitation of neighbours.
In conclusion, despite the fact that dogs are very popular as a pet, keeping them in highly urbanized areas is a dubious initiative, in my opinion. This pets will not only feel discomfort from the lack of places where it would be possible to walk and play with the owner but will also become a source of concern to neighbours because of dogs’ physiological and behavioural characteristics.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70437956204 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87456200464 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576642335766 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.1406751011 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.9 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2 7.06120827912 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181212093357 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733175533581 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438850501939 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107706521947 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274871945306 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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