During the 20th century, contact between different parts of the world developed rapidly thanks to air travel and telecommunication. To what extent do you agree that societies benefit from the increased contact and closer relationships with foreigners brought by international tourism and business?
Preceding the initial occurrence of modernity, air travel and telecommunication had already greatly assisted people’s relationships in the 20th century. I am in total agreement to the point that our lives benefit from stronger bonds with outsiders resulting from the tourism industry and business.
First, international tourism is a huge prompt to globalization that our society is heading toward. It creates chances for people to travel between borders and increases exposure to exotic civilizations including different races and classes. Especially the air travel industry, which helped tremendously in closing the gap between regions from two halves of the world. Encountering people from various corners of the world, either by chance or on purpose, would allow travelers and hostages to get further insights into aspects of the other's life, a farewell exchange for knowledge, opportunities, or just simply a good relationship between strangers. In culmination, the bonds of humanity in our society are likely to be strengthened by this.
Second, thanks to the prescribed convenience of travel and the invention of novel means of communication, businesses are now able to cooperate more. Projects for construction, infrastructure upgrades, and installations of foreign amenities, for instance, are executed thanks to overseas support. Additionally, closer bonds beget a relatively similar level of accountability that makes the process of importing and exporting products more efficient. Their work then would eventually result in collective productivity to uphold the national status of both parties.
In conclusion, the merits delivered by international tourism and business are tangible. Societies need to promote these two realms for our own sake.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80384615385 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2809180235 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665384615385 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4796449692 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.076923077 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201720810148 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590420725033 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448386716562 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103313122533 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632773934379 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.36 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.01 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.