Economic progress is often used to measure a country’s success. However, some people believe that other factors are more important. What other factors should also be considered when measuring a country’s success? Do you think one factor is more important than others?
Although success of any country is measured by the state of its economy, there are some other factors that affect the country progress as education, health and technology spreadness. In this essay, I will discuss these factors and focus on the one I think the most important.
economy of a country is the indicator of its state and its progresss, where countries meassure their success and development according to their economic state. thus, many countries seek to increase their economy to have a better position between each other and to be in a nice state of prosperity and welfare.
However; though economy is the major element for the progress of a country, there are other factors to be considered that contribute in the progress and development of a county. one important factor is the education, as the progress of any nation is measured by the level of its education. A second factor for a sophisticated country is the health of its society, as it is essential for theprogress of any country to have a healthy and good society and members. A third factor for a successful country is the use of technology and modern devises in all their lifestyle.
For me; I think education is the most important factor among those factors, as education has been for many years the best thing that determine the state of a nation and how they do.
To conclude, economic progress has been the dominant factor for a country progress , but other factors , as education, play an essential role in the progress and development of a lot of countries .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, third, thus, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87547169811 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77425310402 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449056603774 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.175133262 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.2 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378307716359 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171609564489 0.084324248473 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721391156972 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227679814818 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101793579901 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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